Remembering Steve

Apple:

Over a million people from all over the world have shared their memories, thoughts, and feelings about Steve. One thing they all have in common — from personal friends to colleagues to owners of Apple products — is how they’ve been touched by his passion and creativity. You can view some of these messages below and share your own at rememberingsteve@apple.com.

Classy move, Apple.



3 thoughts on “Remembering Steve”

  1. it’s your choice of words that is confusing and dilutes your message — “Classy move, Apple” makes it sound like there is a current action, a current “move”, when in fact there is none. which takes time as a reader to figure out — that you’re linking to something old and not a current move at all.

    something like, “Apple created this tribute three years ago, but it’s still touching” etc gives your readers immediate clarity.

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